Friday, June 6, 2014

an essay regarding Dream

Typically, a good essay for the integrated topic will require that you write 150-225 words.

and i wrote 206 words. but to review my essay, the passage was too much compared with the lecture. moreover, my essay uses too much cites. but i couldn't help it...this is the first time to try to write. well there is a first time for everyone. of course I've got to improve my essay.


  In the passage, Freud said that dream reflects our subconscious. We have some wishes and desires. And these wishes and desires are too disturbing or too socially inappropriate to surface from the unconscious to the conscious mind. For example, a student who is concerned about taking an important exam may dream about the exam or some type of symbol for the exam will appear in a dream. And then the student may actually want to cheat the exam to get succeed on the exam. But that is inappropriate and feels a pang of conscience. If the student did that and were found, it might be suspended. And therefore actually the student couldn’t do that. But the student still have that feeling that they want to cheat the exam, which leads to be subconscious. It cause a dream about the exam. In other words, Freud was trying to say that a dream express their deep mind, that is subconscious.
  But in the lecture, another scientist said that dream just reflect a chemical response. The scientist tried to test cats. Partly because cats and humans brain are alike in structure. That’s why the scientist did. As a result, the scientist detected that a dream just responses chemical incident.

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